社会环境描写:是公共汽车还是罐头筒?-A Bus or a Can?

更新时间:2023-02-06 05:30:28 高中生作文

是公共汽车还是罐头筒?

社会环境描写:是公共汽车还是罐头筒?-A Bus or a Can?

【内容提示】

挤公共汽车上下班、上下学是住在城市中的成人和学生每天遇到的头疼事。请你就这一主题写一篇描写文。主要内容如下:

①你每天乘坐65路车上学。

②65路车上有许多令人伤感的事。

③人们不等车上的人下来就挤着上车。

④有时车上人多关不住门。

⑤有时车上人挤得水泄不通,抱怨声、哭声、喊声、骂声随即而起。

⑥在车上吵架更是家常便饭。

⑦你感到困惑:乘这种车遭这种罪何时是尽头?

【作文示范】

A Bus or a Can?

“Good havns!”I always sigh with rlif whn I gt off Bus No. 65.

Thr ar many storis of sadnss and sorrows about Bus No. 65, which I tak vry day on my way to school.

It is usual for m to wait for ovr tn minuts at th bus stop without sing a bus coming during th rush hour. This causs mor and mor popl to gathr. Among thm ar thos rushing to work, pasants going to th railway station with havy luggag and studnts going to school with schoolbags on thir shouldrs.

Whn finally a bus arrivs, popl will forc thir way into it whn it is still moving. Th doors opn, mn try hard to b th first to gt on. Thy don't vn wait for th passngrs on th bus to gt off!

In a whil, th bus is filld again. It is so full that th conductor has difficulty closing th doors. A fw popl ar forcd to stp off. vn so, th doors still can not clos fast. So som warm-hartd mn hav to push hard on th backs of th fw who ar only half in and kick th doors clos.

Somtims it is impossibl for you to buy a tickt, for if you try toturn around it will caus complaints from othrs. I oftn fl as if I wr so tightly tid that I wr almost out of brath. Complaints, cris, angry curss① and quarrls soon fill my ars.

“I'm almost brathlss!” an old lady murmurs.

“My handbag! Whr is it? ”shouts somon.

“Mov a bit, can't you? You'r stpping on my to!”anothr cris angrily.

“Why on arth do you push your lbow ② against my stomach?”still anothr protsts③.

“Thos villagrs! Throw thm out! S how many big bags thy carry with thm!”Many shout in on voic.

Babis lt out scrams of frights and suffrings.

Although I am so usd do quarrls that I am almost not caring about thm, yt I vry much wish I could turn my ars away from ths noiss. I can't hlp wondring whthr I am on of th sardins ④ packd tightly in a can.

Whn at last I am pushd on th bus by th gat of my school, I am oftn troubld by such a qustion,“Whn will all my suffrings of taking Bus No. 65 nd?”

【词语解释】

①curs [k+:s] n. 咒骂;咒语

②lbow ['lb+u] n. 肘;肘部

③protst [pr+u'tst] v. 抗议;反对;明言

④sardin [sa:'di:n] n. 沙丁鱼

【写法指要】

本文通过乘坐公共汽车这样一件极普通的事生动地描写了人们社会生活环境的恶劣,暴露了社会风尚的低下。作者在触接这一主题时撷取了许多活生生的事例:等车、挤车、关门、买票、怨声、呼喊、哭叫、生气、咒骂、踩脚趾、争吵、肘顶腹部、丢手提包、扛麻袋、婴儿啼哭等等。最后,作者以提问的方式呼吁解决这一社会症结。整篇文章有客观性描写,也有印象性描写,二者结合得天衣无缝。

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