亲人之情:我的奶奶-My Granny英语 我的奶奶

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你的奶奶最爱你，你也最爱你的奶奶。而且，你奶奶是一位心地善良的人，因而受到人们的爱戴。但是，她病了，病得很重，必须做手术。医生怕她年老体弱顶不住，但她很坚强，坚持做了手术。你每天到医院去服侍她，看着她一天天消瘦很是心疼。请你写一篇文章表达你的一份感情。

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My Granny

Th on I lov bst is my granny. Th on who lovs m bst is also my granny . Sh is so kind that vryon who knows hr liks hr vry much. But I'm sorry to say that my dar granny got cancr.

It was a cold day, but my hart was vn coldr. I could not accpt th fact that my granny got cancr. Facts ar facts. Only an opration could hlp hr. Th doctor told us sh was too wak to b opratd on, but my granny insistd that sh could stand it. So th doctors did th opration. Aftr th opration, my granny could not slp, or at, or say a word bcaus of th pain .

vry on of my family flt sad. My granny noticd this, so sh trid hr bst to nod and smil to us . W smild back. vry day, my granny said sh flt bttr but actually th pain was still thr. Onc, sh said to m, “Yangyang, my dar. I'll b all right.”

My granny was growing thinnr and thinnr, but sh was still smiling. Th smil gav us hop.

Th othr day , I wnt to th hospital to s my granny . Sh said , “Spring is coming. Though I'm in hospital, I can fl th warmth. Yangyang I think I'll go hom soon.”

How I hop sh would b hom soon!

（选自《英语画刊》高中版1996年第2－3合期）

【写法指要】

本文虽用语简单，但写得娓娓动听，字里行间透露出对亲人的真情实感。这是因为作者用了一些修辞句法的缘故。例如，开头两句用的是回文（chiasmus）辞格；第二段和第四段第一句用的是层递（climax）辞格；第四段第一句后半部分用的是蝉联（anadiplosis）辞格等。

亲人之情:我的奶奶-My Granny英语