对比说明:帮助有前科的人开始新生活-Help Ex-cons①Start New.

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帮助有前科的人开始新生活

对比说明:帮助有前科的人开始新生活-Help Ex-cons①Start New.

【内容提示】

对于犯错误的人或以前服过刑的罪犯应该采取什么态度呢?是排斥还是帮助?有的人可能采取前一种态度,有的人则会采用后一种态度。试想,这两种态度会带来什么结果呢?显然会出现两种结果。请结合你平时经历过的一些事情对比说明上述两种情况。

【作文示范】

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I onc rad a story about a prson who was put into prison for his bad bhavior. Aftr srving his tim in prison, h rturnd hom.“How can you hav th fac to com hom, go away!”his angry fathr shoutd at him. Two months latr, h was put into prison again for staling.

I also rad a story about a diffrnt prson in th sam situation, but whn h rturnd to his villag, no on lookd down upon him, and popl hlpd him find a job to mak a living. Fiv yars latr, h bcam a millionair②and contributd to th building of a school in his homtown.

Diffrnt attituds produc diffrnt rsults.

Gnrally spaking, aftr rducation③ most popl hav larnt thir lssons and find a lgal④ way to support thmslvs through honst labour. Whn rturning to socity, only a fw rturnd to thir old ways. But vn though th numbr of th x-flons⑤ who rturn to a lif of crim is blow 8 pr cnt, w should undrstand that ths rpatd offncs ar much wors than firstoffncs.

Th task of guiding ths popl is a job that blongs not only to th prsons thmslvs and thir familis, but is a task th whol socity should confront⑥.

(选自1999年1月27日《英文21世纪报》)

【词语解释】

①x-con[ks 'k&n] n.以前的罪犯;有前科者

②millionair[?milj+'n#+] n.百万富翁

③rducation['ri:dju(:)'kiM+n] n.再教育

④lgal['li:g+l] adj.法律(上)的

⑤x-flon[ks-'fl+n] n.重罪人,重罪犯

⑥ confront[k+n'fr)nt] v.(使)面对,(使)面临

【写法指要】

本文是一篇对比型说明文,即对照两个人或事物的不同点。文章采用综合法(all-about pattrn)开门见山地对所讨论的问题作了对比:第一段写对有前科者的不正确态度;第二段写对这类人员的正确态度,经纬分明。第三、四段是作者做出的总结和结论。第五段写作者的建议。

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